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Crap, Love. Chapter 1

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Post by iSushay Sat May 09, 2009 7:25 pm

This is just a story out of boredom. o_o;
Chapter 1.

1...2...3...6..10...69..
Lord god, how many cigarettes did my mom smoked?! I lost count. But shes like drunk as hell, smoking like a motha fxcker, heart brokened from love. I mean its no big whoop, she could find another guy. Kinda stupid&useless because she only known him for 7 months&she's engaged. Better take that engagement crap off, hah.

My uh, "future" step-dad left us because we were bankrupted. We were actually one of the riches people in the country. Now look at us now, were broke as hell. Funny eh? I think all he wanted was just the money. Because everyday he would ask to go to the bank to get some of the money, & go. zzzz; iunno why does my mom love him so much. His ugly as hell too.

My real dad died from a car crash. Yeps, regular reasons why he died. I never really talked to him or know him alot because his always in different places. He was a traveler, now a dead person in heaven. iunno, maybe hell even?

"Rose, get your ass down here!" said Mom.
"What?" I asked.
"Go buy me some more cigarettes."
"Hell no, you already smoked too much." "You smell like crap. Go take a shower."
"Go buy me some now, I don't fxcking have the repeat this."
"Go get it yourself. I'm sick of tired of your ass crying&whining about Dad." "Just go take a shower, brush your teeth, and go sleep."
"DO it."
"No."
After that, my mom bitched slapped me with a cigarette box. Is that all she got?!
"What the fxck." I yelled.
"I told you to get my fxcking cigarettes but you didn't get them. Next time you disobey, I'll come and smack you with a shoe. [LOL]"
"Mom, get your fxcking lazy ass up and buy some yourself. I'm not gonna let you hurt your self more."
"I can do whatever I want! BUY ME SOME NOW." my mom yelled.
"No."
My mom then, hit me hard with a shoe. & [filter], it hurts like hell. After that, she passed out. So I call 9-1-1 and the police, the uhm, red&white cars came& sirens came up. So she was sent to the hospital, and I had to wait for a LOOOOOOOOOOONG time on this crappy waiting couch thingies.

While later, I got hungry. I went to a Chinese restaurant and order a take out. I got some yummy foods and a Sprite drink. It was some noodle thingies iunno what they called, some sugar donuts I think, & these thingies I have no clue what they are but they are hella good. The person that delivered the food to me was smoking hot, iunno whats his name but he looks F~INE. [LOLOLOL HAPPY JIN?]

When I got back to hospital, they were still not done what was wrong with my mom. So I started eating my food and finished my drink. I was done with my drink, but I still had some leftovers. Guess imma save that for tomorrow since im broke now.

It was really annoying waiting for such a long time. So I decided to go take a piss&a crap. I had to badly from eating all that food. &boy, it was quite a long time. Lets just said I had diarrhea. When I got back, the doctors are back from the emergency room. So I walked to them and asked how was my mom.

"Im sorry, but she passed away." the doctor said.
"How?" I asked, curiously.
"Well she smoked too much, way too much girl, you can't even believe how many she smoked."
"Then where the hell am I gonna stay? Both of my parents are dead now."
"I'll guess your an orphan now."
"WHAT?!"
"Well unless you wanna stay out in the streets, get raped, go get drugged." sighed the doctor.
"Ugh, fine." "But wait, WHICH orphanage am I going to?"
"I'll tell you tomorrow, its not a populated or a poor orphanange. Just a normal one."
"Wait what the fxck? I HAVE TO SLEEP IN THIS CRAPPY PLACE?" I yelled hard.
"Better than nothing." the doctor said.
"Can't I just pack my stuff quick?"
"The people at the orphan will do it."
*Fuck, I said in my mind.*

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Post by Guest Sat May 09, 2009 7:26 pm

Woot I am hot???? Very Happy

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Post by iSushay Sat May 09, 2009 7:28 pm

No, you told me to.
LOL.

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Post by Tony Sat May 09, 2009 7:31 pm

Tony is a black orphan >:]
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Post by imLISA- Sat May 09, 2009 7:38 pm

LOL =DD
why sprite - pepsi please D:
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Post by xRaiindrops Sat May 09, 2009 8:53 pm

haaa?
good story :\
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Post by Yagame Fri May 15, 2009 7:20 pm

i agree with jenn i like this story. lol i wanna be in it Surprised
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Post by Julia Sun May 17, 2009 10:41 pm

AWESOME STORYY =) did you just make it up ? LOL CAUSE IT LOOKS LIKE IT !
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Post by iSushay Mon May 18, 2009 12:40 pm

yes me make up story. copy story be bad :c

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Post by Shaaronn Tue May 26, 2009 1:42 am

I Actually liked it. Good Job Nhi. ^_^.

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Post by Gogee Tue May 26, 2009 2:43 pm

i be a korean dude when u make next chapter (:
pls put me in Very Happy
as...2nd maincharater <3
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